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little boy in a broken world

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little boy,
one day you will unstitch yourself from that outgrown shadow
and find that your hands are no longer too small
to grasp at the clouds.
my love,
one day you will spread your new-fledged wings
and fly away from me
into the arms of your lover

but sweet, i won't mind -
i wish you sunbeam smiles
and butterfly kisses
and hope that your name is now your own.
i hope that you fit like a jigsaw
into the curve of his arms, love,
and that when you come together
you bring the broken world with you.
Kind of, sort of a sequel to [link]

I wrote this to my boy's boyfriend. They are beautiful together. I wish them joy. :love:

:iconthewrittenrevolution:
Was the random input of "my love" and "sweet" distracting?
Should the stanzas be split, or does it interrupt the flow?
Does a happy feeling come across?

And a question for you personally, dear readers, because I love to hear about people in love -
what's your favorite quality of the person you love?
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starfin1's avatar
Wow. This is so beautiful! Thanks for sharing!